Sunday, 15 November 2015



REALITY TV.

How does Hills define reality TV? Describe his definitions in the context of a contemporary Reality TV show.

Television programs in which real people are continuously filmed, designed to be entertaining to other people rather than informative.

 

There are a few particular perspectives to define reality TV. One of this is the people that are viewing or viewers. Reality TV came to be by views walking around with cameras filming random people. According to [Hills 2005] it is said that these are shows that filmed everyday people and put them on TV. This can be problematic because some people tend to cross the line and it brings about questions such as Is it alright to film real people’s? Is it invading privacy? Is it really real? Well to honest reality TV are sometimes fake but there is a 50% that part of it are real. However the people who are watching don’t really care about the details, it’s just really easy watching. People do not really take reality really seriously I mean you can miss an episode or choose to not watch it. It doesn’t really matter. (Hill, 2005) This shows us that while a reality television program can be structured and warped, many still retain the spontaneity and accessibility of real life. Reality TV is compared to a stranger you have just met, you just introduce yourself and then become friends. Don’t really need to go in to many details. And also the episodes keeps changing I mean that sometimes their is no connection between the episodes. I think that reality TV is more general rather than extend or described within details.

 

References:

Hill, A. (2005) The reality genre. In A. Hill, Reality TV: Audiences and Popular Factual Television. (pp. 14 – 40). Oxon: Routledge. 


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NAME: Faamoa Seumanu  ID:13841093 POP GENRES ASSIGNMENT 2

Fan Fiction

Princess Momoneki

Something huge happened; the village was attacked by the demons from the forest. The King was filled with rage so he summoned his most trusted spies Lady Eboshi and Jiko to destroy the forest and deliver back to him the head of the great forest spirit. Without realising the consequences Lady Eboshi and Jiko did as they were commanded and chopped the Great Spirit’s head off. The Great Spirit when on a rampage and consumed everything in finding his head. In realising this people of Iron town seek help from a young boy named Ashitaka who was in search of a cure for his curse. At first he was reluctant to help because he doubts that he may not succeed but after a lot of persuasion from the people he changed his mind and decided to help out. During his journey he encounters a female, the adopted daughter of a wolf goddess.  At first she was reluctant in getting to know him because of her hatred towards the humans for destroying their home forest. But she has no choice but to ally with him to save everyone. They search desperately and finally they found it and returned it to the Great Forest Spirit. As a reward the Great Forest Spirit swiped away all that was damaged and changed it to a beautiful grass; all that was destroyed was refined. After everything was resolved Ashitaka and San took their separate ways. Ashitak decided to stay in Iron town and San returned to the forest.

After the separation, Ashitaka when and visit Lady Eboshi and asked if she can help with the rebuilding of Iron town which she accepted with pleasure.

Lady Eboshi: I have no choice since I am the one capable of all the damage in Iron town.

Ashitaka: Thank you

Ashitaka turned to the people and said: I have decided to remain here in Iron town and help you all in the rebuilding of this village.

After the conversation he looked around and saw that there was nothing left, everything was destroyed. But this did not make him waver, he cling on to the hope of rebuilding the village in help from the people and Lady Eboshi.

After a while the people were working on rebuilding the town when Ashitaka saw monk Jiko still there. He when over and asked what he was doing there in which he replied: There is nowhere else to go. If I returned back to my village I will be executed by the king for not succeeding in my mission. And if I hide the King’s knights will hunt me down and brought me to justice. So I have decided to stay here in Iron town instead. Besides I also helped out in rebuilding of this town. And I know that you will help me, right! After all you are a good person and helping is what you do. He smiled back at him.

Jiko: What about you are you not leaving with princess San?

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Ashitaka: No she said that she cannot because she still hates humans for what they did to them. But I can still visit her sometimes.

Jiko: Good on you boy.

While they were still talking the Kings knight arrived at the moment and commanded for Eboshi and Ziko heads. If not they will destroy what is left of Iron town.

The people were starting to get worried and started to paniced. But then Ashitaka calm them down and said that he will come up with a solution with this situation. So he discussed it with Jiko and Lady Eboshi. And come up with a difficult situation.

They brought back the news to the people that they will decide to ask the wolf tribe to help them out.  The people stated mumbling doubting that the wolves will help them.

People: What makes you think they will help us? Despite everything that our kind has done to them huh!

Ashitaka: I am not sure either but we have to try our best to persuade them in helping us. We need their help in protecting our town.

People: They agreed.

Ashitaka when back to San and asked for their help.

San: Why should we help the humans after everything they have dome to us?

Ashitaka: I can understand that you are still mad but we need your help in saving our town. If not we will be force to leave Iron town.

San: Fine, we will help but this will be the last time, am I understood.

Ashitaka: Yes, thank you very much, He smiled back at her.

This gave her a plush on her face.

After this the wolves and the humans worked together to get rid of the Kings guard.

The people were having a celebration party for there victory but Ashitak did not join because of his sadness over San leaving.

A flashback of there recently conversation

Ashitaka: Why don’t you stay here with me in Iron town? We can work together in rebuilding this town and stay together.

San: As much as I want to but I can’t. I just can’t forgive the humans for what they have done to me and my home.

Ashitaka: I understand. And thank you for all that help that you have given to me and these people.

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San:  You are so very welcome

Ishitaka: I guess this is goodbye now

San: I guess! This is goodbye

Ishitaka: One day you and I will be together again. And that day will come very soon.

San: Plush, face turned red. She smiled back at him and answered back: yeah one day.

Ishitaka: Yelled! Goodbye San, thanks for everything again.

San: Goodbye

 

COMMANTARY

My fan fiction replicates some of Voglers {1998) mythic narrative structure, and character archetypes including the plot point. My fan fiction was just a small scene from the film Princess Mononoke. I have decided to write a small fraction of act 1 introducing the main cause of the whole conflict in the story and when straight to act 2 where there is a turning point. This is where Ishitaka first encounter friends, allies and enemies. I did this first because it is a short story and also the audience prefers to aim straight to the point without beating around the push.

So my fan fiction focuses on Act 2 because it is mention by Vogler {1998) this part takes up about half percent {50) of a story or a film. And then my it moves on in to Act 3, where Ishitaka resolves everything, overcoming his enemy, In possession of what he needed and claims the gold and makes a decision on what he would do with it. Within a story or film the climax is always big and the solution is fast and short just like what Vogler {1998) claims they usually are.

For the character archetypes I used some of Vogler’s {1998) for according to him there are eight major character archetypes. Hero: the one who sacrifices for the needs of others. Mentor: someone who helps and teaches the hero, threshold guardian: menacing face to the hero. Herald: Introduces a new challenge to the hero, shape shifter: Characters who can change forms, shadow: shows the dark side, evil, ally: someone who supports and travels with the hero and trickster: mischief, desire for change, selfish.

For example:

Ashitaka is the hero in my fan fiction, who helps people in need of help.

San: Is an ally who travelled and helped out the hero in many ways

Threshold guardian: Moro the mother of San, wolf goddess.

King’s guard: Herald who proposes a new threat to the hero

People: Mentor who persuade encourage the hero to fight for their town.
 
 
References:
Vogler, C. 1998. The writer’s journey: Mythic structure for writers. Studio City, CA: Michael Wiese Productions.
Friedel, S. (2011, August 15). Vogler's look at mythic structure is universally valuable | A ton of useful information about screenwriting from screenwriter John August. Retrieved from http://johnaugust.com/2011/the-writers-journey-mythic-structure-for-writers
 

Tuesday, 10 November 2015

Reality TV Genre: Survivor

How does Hill define Reality Television?

Reality TV is a innovative and unconventional genre that accentuates and reflects human reality in a entertaining and fantastical way. Hill (2005) explains 'there is no one definition of reality programming, but many, competing definitions of what has come to be called the reality genre.' Hill describes techniques that are unique to the genre such as non-professional actors, unscripted dialogue, surveillance footage, hand-held cameras. Although techniques may be commonly used among the genre, the variety of styles has developed within the genre over time. In the early stages of the genre, there was a heavy focus on officialdom. This focus is on people who hold a positions of power and authority that may include governments and politicians, police and emergency services, or such positions like doctors and lawyers. Over the decade the genre has become increasingly fluid, with MTV empire spanning an entire channel dedicated to reality TV. The focus of such shows have expanded from officialdom to everyday reality and rely on viewers relatability and empathy towards the characters.

Reality TV strives on new formats and often regenerates itself. After a successful first season, writers and directors will develop and shift the format, characters, action and drama, perhaps even context. This will maintain the interest of viewers, who can use previous seasons as background schema for the current season. For example Survivor, this series began in 2000 and is continuing on currently with season 31. Each season the format and structure of the 'game' is considerably similar to the last but with a new cast and environment, the season is decidedly different from the last. The personal development of the cast, the relationships between teams and individuals and the series of challenges the cast are put through, evoke watchers to follow the progress through out the season and inevitably on to the next one. It's important to note that reality TV tends to finish with a final 'catch up' interview panel episode, where cast can reflect on experiences after the show is aired. This is a prominent feature of the genre that differentiates reality tv from other genres.




Reference List:

Hill, A. (2005) The reality genre. In A. Hill, Reality TV: Audiences and Popular Factual Television. (pp. 14 – 40). Oxon: Routledge. 

Sunday, 8 November 2015

eden jarrett

Fan fiction
“I don’t mind going by myself mama, I always do!” said 8 year old Tintin as he set off for another summers adventure. “If you are sure Tintin, be home in time for your tea!” Off he went with his usually attire, a trench coat, bag, pen, and paper to enjoy what was going to be another beautiful day with lots to write about! Tintin, a young Belgium journalist in the making enjoyed writing about what he got up to each day.
Today was no exception, as Tintin took a route he had never before taken, finding himself unsure of where he was in no time. Only this time, Tintin who was usually the master of getting himself out of sticky situations found the sun was going down and it was getting dark. As he pushed through branches dusted off old signs he found himself walking in circles. “Oh no, I’m going to miss my tea and mama is going to be very worried!” Tintin grunted. It was however with a satisfied grunt, as regardless of the trouble he was in Tintin wouldn’t help but admire his new surroundings. Huge tree’s what would have been around for centuries and beautiful flowers blossoming along the track. “Just magnificent”, he whispered as he got his pen and paper out.     
The sun was almost completely gone and Tintin could no longer see. “Of course!” he shouted with joy, “I packed my flash light!” Suddenly Tintin heard the rustling of bushes and a faint noise. He was not one to get frightened, and followed the noises. ‘THUD’ Tintin was startled as something rolled out of the bushes and rolled right before his feet.
Tintin crouched down to find a small shivering puppy covered in dirt. “Hello little guy, where did you come from?” Tintin asked. The puppy responded with nothing but a small yelp. Tintin picked him up and cradled him, “boy I can’t wait to write about this!”
Together they head off on the journey home. Tintin heard footsteps behind him and turned his head. Maybe this man will know the way out of here, he thought to himself. “Hello sir, do you know the way outside of this bush?” “NO!” The man yelled. “Oh, I will tell you the way out if you give me your puppy.” “No thanks sir, we will find our way”. “Give me the puppy, or else!” The man threatened, as he tried to grab Tintin by the collar. Tintin quickly ducked out of the way and tumbled off the track down a steep hill for what seemed like forever.  “Blistering barnacles” he shouted as he tumbled trying not to squash the puppy. At the bottom Tintin was covered in leaves and sticks in a small bed of water. Not scared, Tintin thought up ways to get out of the situation. But before he knew it, the puppy was clearing the way of leaves and sticks off of Tintin. “Good boy!” he said as he sat up and gave the puppy a pat. It didn’t take long for Tintin to realise that he was not far from home, and he brushed himself off and again cradled the puppy.  “I’ve seen this river before it leads us right back to the house! I know the way boy” he said excitedly as he set off on his journey down the river. He took off his trench coat and wrapped it around the wet puppy as he shivered and whimpered slightly.  
Tintin found his way home before the sunrise. “Where have you been? I was worried sick!” Shouted mama while she smothered him in hugs. “I got lost mama; this puppy helped me find my way home”. “You cannot keep him Tintin; we will clean him up in the morning and find him a home”. Tintin tossed and turned all night. Wow, what a day he thought as he thought up ways he could keep the puppy. He always wanted a friend to go out with him on his journeys.
Tintin was up at the crack of dawn ready to see the puppy and write down everything he could about him. “Good morning”, Tintin greeted. “Woof!” the puppy yelped with excitement to finally see someone. Tintin scrubbed and scrubbed the puppy until he was spotless. “Look at that mama, he is white as snow!” “Please can we keep him, just one more day?” “You can keep him for the morning Tintin, then he must go.”  Tintin used that morning like it was last, as he had never had a friend. The puppy followed him everywhere, and barked in response every time Tintin spoke. His mama watched over as Tintin looked so happy playing with and caring for this puppy. “Oh I can’t give him up”, she murmured to herself.
“Tintin, it’s time to come in”. As Tintin ran over to his house, the puppy sprinted closely behind with his tongue flapping around. He sat neatly next to Tintin as he said to his mother “Is it time for him to go now?” with a saddened look on his face. “No Tintin, I am going to let you keep him.” Now you must think of a name!”
“Oh mama his name is Snowy!” “I am going to look after him and make sure his coat is always as white as snow”. Snowy, the small little terrier looked up at his new owner and knew that he had found his home and promised himself that he will always help Tintin, the way Tintin helped him.

Commentary
My fan fiction replicates a lot of Vogler’s (1998) points, however does not follow them all. Typically, my fan fiction which enters the world of the comic ‘The Adventures of Tintin’ stays close to the ordinary world without exploring elements of the supernatural. Tintin obtains his original characteristics of an adventurous boy who is able to overcome obstacles. However my fan fiction takes a different approach to a typical Tintin story line and explores him in his childhood. By taking the reader back to Tin tin’s childhood, they are able to see how some of the most prominent characters in a story were introduced, which in this case is Snowy. Thus, it links to Act 1 of Voglers structure and explores and ordinary world while establishing the setting and characters. The turning points and transition to Vogler’s act two occurs when Tintin is faced with an enemy, which in this case I Am referring to as the Herald. When developing the characters of my fan fiction, I can refer to some of Vogler’s character archetypes (Volger, 1998).

The Hero – Vogler (1998) determines the hero of a story as the character who puts another characters safety before theirs by sacrificing their own needs. Tintin, the hero of the story very often finds himself is sticky situations; however is a master at getting himself out of them. Getting lost in the bush is the first turning point of the story, according to Vogler, when Tintin was faced with the decision of saving the puppy, or leaving it there and getting home. Obvious for Tintin, a character who thrives off challenges he opted bring the puppy to safety and warmth, playing a heroic role for a character in need (Vogler, 1998).

The mentor - Vogler (1998) describes this as a parent like figure who is protective of the stories hero. In this case, as Tintin is a child his mother plays the role of his mentor. From the beginning of the story she shows protective traits towards Tintin before he takes off on an adventure, and on his late return. She further backs up her mentoring role at the concluding moments of the story where she lets Tintin keep Snowy as a reward for his behavior.

The Herald - Vogler describes the herald as a character that gives the hero new challenges, and therefore would refer to the man in the bush as the herald of the story, as he puts the hero in a dangerous situation. He tries to persuade Tintin to hand the puppy over in exchange for information, and then applies force towards them both. Regardless of his spiteful intentions, his heralding failed and actually helped Tintin find his way home, which gave the story momentum to push to the conclusion (Vogler, 1998).

The ally – The ally according to Volger is a character who travels with the hero and serves many functions throughout their journeys. While Snowy is not much of an ally for Tintin throughout this story, it sets them up for the rest of the Adventures of Tintin. Tintin typically meets his ally for the first time, without knowing that one day he will not only play the role of his best friend, but his mentor, and ally as well.  

Thus I was able to follow Vogler’s mythical structure and character archetypes, however was limited to only some of the plot points. I hope to have achieved portraying him as a courageous and outgoing aspiring reporter from a younger age.


Vogler, C. 1998. The writer’s journey: Mythic structure for writers. Studio City, CA: Michael Wiese Productions.

Friday, 6 November 2015

LAM Ze Cing 1272389 POP GENRES ASSIGNMENT 2

Part 1: Fan Fiction (Tintin)
It was a very quiet night at the bay but there were many workers moving big wooden boxes onto a large white ship.
“Get all the boxes on the ship! Quick! Quick! Hurry up!” shouted the worker wearing in black.
“Put that box over there, be quick! I want this ship to leave the bay before dawn!” yelled the man in grey Cheongsam and brown shoes.
The man in grey Cheongsam and brown shoes approached slowly, everyone bowed to him. Yes. He is the owner of that ship and the employer of all the workers that are moving the boxes onto the ship. His name is Tintin. He is an influential and well-known man in Shanghai, owner of all the opium companies in Shanghai and he is also an opium smuggler. This ship is preparing to sail to India for opium trade with Maharaja. Chang is Tintin’s assistant and he has been working for Tintin for more than three years. Chang always maintained a good relationship with Maharaja in India as he is the one to get in touch with Maharaja for opium trade. The opium trade collaboration between Maharaja and Tintin has been almost two years already and Maharaja is their main customer. While the workers were still busy transferring wooden boxes onto the ship, Chang went to the telephone booth without letting anyone knows but he was supposed to be at the bay supervising the workers. Tintin was resting while waiting for the ship to be fully loaded before departing to India. He did not realize that Chang was away.
“Tintin’s ship has got one hundred and twenty wooden boxes full of opium and he is going to trade these opium with Maharaja in India. The ship will be leaving the bay before dawn. Arrest Tintin.” Chang spoke softly over the phone and then hung up. Left the telephone booth with his hat on and black jacket on. Running quickly back to the bay before anyone finds out that he went to make a phone call.
Chang’s real identity is a Japanese spy, he was contacting his superior, Mitsuhirato, informing him to come and prevent the ship from sailing to India for opium trade. Chang has been providing information to his superior since the day he started working for Tintin but they have not got a good timing and chance to get Tintin arrested.It is almost dawn and workers are getting more and more exhausted.
“How many boxes left?” asked Chang to the workers.
“Approximately twenty boxes and we are ready to go.” replied the worker.
“Freeze! Do not move! Do not move! Put all the boxes down now! Now!” shouted Mitsuhirato. Mitsuhirato and his team came, holding guns on their hand, pointing towards all the workers. Tintin woke up very panic when he heard Mitsuhirato shouting, he then quickly jumped into the sea to flee away. Mitsuhirato’s team confiscated all one hundred twenty boxes of opium on the ship and brought Tintin’s workers back to the jail. Unfortunately, Tintin fled away, they searched for him but could not find him so Mitsuhirato issued a warrant to arrest Tintin. Tintin hid himself in a deserted island near Shanghai, he was hurt by a rock when he jumped into the sea to flee away from Mitsuhirato’s arrest. After twelve days living that deserted island, Tintin’s wound got better and he decided to leave Shanghai as he understands that he is now under arrest. He decided to leave Shanghai by train but before that, he would like to take revenge on Mitsuhirato of making him losing the business with Maharaja. Tintin lived on the deserted island and he did not get the news that all the other workers were jailed, he thought they managed to flee away like he did. Tintin tried to find a way to contact Chang as he still does not know Chang’s real identity. He went back to Shanghai and went to Chang’s residence at midnight and knocked on his door.
“Chang, it’s me. I need your help. I want to kill Mitsuhirato and I need to leave Shanghai. Get me a train ticket leaving Shanghai at noon time tomorrow.” said Tintin.
“Where have you been, Tintin? I was so worried about you. Come in.” Chang was shocked that Tintin came to look for him but he has to pretend himself as he cannot reveal his real identity to Tintin.
Chang invited Tintin to sleepover at his place and he will bring Tintin to the train station tomorrow at noon. Chang secretly made a contact by phone call with Mitsuhirato and inform him that Tintin is currently at his place. Chang and Mitsuhirato discussed a plan to arrest Tintin tomorrow at the train station.
“Let’s depart to the train station now.” said Chang to Tintin.
“Let’s finish our business with Mitsuhirato before heading to the train station.” said Tintin.
Chang advised Tintin to leave Shanghai as soon as possible and forget about taking revenge. Tintin agreed. They put on hats, and used handkerchiefs to cover their mouth in case someone can recognize them. They slowly walked to the train station and Chang passed the train ticket to Tintin and left.
“Bang!” a loud gunshot sound is heard at the train station when Tintin is preparing to board the train leaving Shanghai. Mitsuhirato and his team came to the train station to arrest Tintin. Tintin was helpless and he got arrested by Mitsuhirato.
Tintin has been sent to jail and waiting for his trial. Tintin kept thinking on how Mitsuhirato knew that he was at the train station and got him arrested. And now, Tintin realized that Chang is a Japanese spy and he was so mad at himself to be trusting Chang for such a long time. Today is the time for Tintin’s trial. Tintin was sentenced to death, Tintin said he will never forgive Change before his death. Chang was disappointed with what Tintin had said but he is glad that his mission is finally accomplished.

Part 2: Commentary

My fan fiction storyline and characters had totally changed and it is very different from the original story. Tintin is the owner of opium companies and has trading relationship with Maharaja in India. Chang pretends to work for Tintin but his real identity is a Japanese spy, finding a chance to get Tintin arrested as tasked by his superior. Mitsuhirato is Chang’s superior and he tasked Chang to pretend to work for Tintin in order to help them to find a chance of arresting Tintin for opium trade. Chang found a chance to arrest Tintin when his ship is preparing to sail to India for opium trade. Chang contacted his superior, Mitsuhirato, informing him by phone and told him the venue and the time of the event. Tintin fled to a deserted island after jumping into the sea and went back to Shanghai to ask help from Chang in taking revenge on Mitsuhirato. Chang’s real identity is still unrevealed when Tintin came back to Shanghai. Tintin trusted Chang so he listened to Chang’s advice to flee away from Shanghai and not taking revenge on Mitsuhirato. Chang discussed on a plan to arrest Tintin at the train station with Mitsuhirato and they finally succeeded. Tintin was in jail and later sentenced to death and Chang finally accomplished his mission.

In reference to Vogler’s (1998), fan fiction creates variety of character archetypes. My fan fiction story is based on Hergé’s “Tintin and the Blue Lotus”. According to Vogler (1998), there are eight major character archetypes. Hero, mentor, threshold guardian, herald, shapeshifter, shadow, ally and trickster. I included three types of Vogler’s (1998) character archetypes.

The Shadow: Tintin. He is opium companies’ owner.
The Hero: Chang. He is a Japanese spy which helped the government to arrest Tintin.
The Mentor: Mr Mitsuhirato. He is the superior of Chang and sent him off for the mission to arrest Tintin.

My fan fiction story also followed most of Vogler’s (1998) mythic structure.

Act I

  • Ordinary World (Indirectly as Tintin is originally a comic)
  • Call to adventure by trading opium with Maharaja
  • Refusal of call (Not included in the story)
  • Contacting with the mentor about the plan to arrest Tintin
  • Crossing the first threshold by leaving Shanghai to India

Act II

  • Tests allies, enemies where Chang is a Japanese spy and helped Mitsuhirato to arrest Tintin
  • Approach to the inmost cave where the workers are sent to jail and Tintin wanted to flee away from Shanghai
·         Supreme ordeal where Tintin came back to look for Chang and Chang had to pretend and keep his real identity unrevealed

Act III

·         Reward where Mitsuhirato successfully arrested Tintin
·         The road back where Tintin went back to Shanghai to seek Chang’s help
·         Resurrection which is the words Tintin said before his death
·         Return with elixir which is Chang is glad that he accomplished his mission

In conclusion, I am happy that my fan fiction story was able to follow most of Vogler’s (1998) mythic narrative structure, and character archetypes.


Reference:

Vogler, C. 1998. The writer’s journey: Mythic structure for writers. Studio City, CA: Michael Wiese Productions.






Thursday, 5 November 2015

Balazs Borbely de Roff Assignment 2: Epilogue to “The Man in the High Castle”

Fanfiction
Epilogue to “The Man in the High Castle”


"Nothing is forgotten," said he; and then:
 "Nothing I have forgotten is worth the remembering."

The trial

The vastness of the courtroom made Frank Fink uneasy. As a matter of fact, in his mind a room entailed walls and ceilings and most importantly a floor, none of which were present in the space he found himself in. For some reason it was still perfectly clear to him that he was in a courtroom though.  The faces occupying the field of his vision were unknown to him, but he was fully aware of their functions in the course of unfolding events. He realized with increasing shock, that he even knew their names despite their unfamiliarity: the presiding judge was Deus, on his right sat Christopher Vogler and Joseph Campbell; the scribes were the Herrs Carl Jung and Wolfgang Pauli and the prosecutor Monsieur Louis Cypher. He somehow knew also that the defendant was Philip Kindred Dick. He turned around and noticed that the crowd of the audience contained Captain Wegener, General Tedeki, Mr Tagomi and to his deepest alarm, Mr Robert Childan.
He also caught a glimpse of Benito Mussolini, General Eisenhower, Dr Joseph Goebbels, Emperor Constantinus, Hernando Cortez, The Red Baron, General Douglas McArthur and Admiral Yamamoto scattered in the sea of unfamiliar faces. The jury consisted of Simon Peter and his brother Andrew; James and John Zebedee; Philip and Bartholomew; Thomas and Matthew the tax collector; James de Alphaeus, and Thaddaeus; Simon the Zealot and Judas Iscariot.  He realised then, that if he looked at anyone, he knew their names. He tried to adjust the neck of his shirt to feel more comfortable, but he had to realize that his hands could not feel or touch anything. He was not sure anymore if he could feel the shirt on his body either.
The voice of prosecutor Louis Cypher echoed inside his head:
“Your Honour, the People accuse the defendant of dangerously weakening the walls between reality domains 1559B888Q4545ZTQM and 1559B888WWDWRZTQQ in the dimension “Cognition and Memory” by careless use of the Campbell-Vogler protocol in one count, the inclusion of multiple protagonists causing confusion in one count, and committing heresy by abandoning the recommended denouement in one count, and perverting the flow of yin and yang by faking oracle readings, all of these crimes committed in his book The Man in the High Castle. The people ask for appropriate punishment, a minimum of 1 million years in prison without parole and the repeated losing of his spectacles at least 47 times daily.”
Judge Deus called the representative of the defence. The leader of the defence team, Gautama started speaking:
“Your Honour, first of all the defence wishes to express their deepest concern about the superficial method of inquiry of the prosecution. The prosecution finds themselves in error by not studying the versions of the book in reality domains 15511888Q4145ZTQF, 1559B888Q4VVVZTQM and 1559B888Q4545ZTQZ, which clearly demonstrate the balanced handling of synchronicity.”
The comforting baritone carried on:
“The Defence wishes to call the venerable Celestial Dragon I Ching.”
A voice, - whose deepness was beyond Frank’s imagination - replied. Frank tried to look at the face he was associating with the voice, but he could not decide if he “saw” an old man or a dragon.
“I am at your service, Your Honour. Thank you for your call, Enlightened One. How can I help?”
Gautama continued:
“Can you please tell the jury about your dealings with the defendant?”
“Most certainly. I have allowed him to study the Tao by letting him find me in the books of Dr Jung. He showed remarkable diligence in obtaining my physical manifestation in the language he understands, honouring me by choosing an illustrated hardcover copy and casting hexagrams whenever I chose to make him doubt himself. An excellent disciple indeed.”
“In your expert opinion, did he pervert the flow of events by picking and choosing hexagrams according to his predetermined storyline?”
“My wisdom has not evolved from policing every single coin tossed and yarrow stalk cast and I do not concern myself with the doings of every single storyteller. If he cheated, that was also caused by the unstoppable forces of synchronicity and possibly influenced by the awakening Fourth Replicator. The walls between reality domains are unbreakable, even if they are not completely impenetrable.”
“Thank you, Venerable One. We wish to ask the court to allow our client to enter a plea.”
Judge Deus’ voice caused tremors along Frank’s spine:
“How do you plead, Mr Dick?”
“Not guilty, Your Honour” said Dick, causing Frank to jump. Dick’s voice was that of Frank’s own.
“Does the prosecution wish to ask anything else from the witness or the defendant?” said the judge.
“Yes, Your Honour. Does the venerable Celestial Dragon intend to support the defendant in his decisions further? If so, what precautions does he recommend for the rest of us?” said Louis Cypher.
The I Ching paused for a while before answering, but then spoke before the restlessness could overtake the public:
“That choice is not mine to make. If he asks, I shall answer, and every time I answer a different path shall be chosen. His understandings of the readings will be his, and so will be yours, should you choose to consult me, Counsellor. No other precaution than always paying for your train ride is advisable.” Frank was quite sure, that he saw some fire in the air around the dragon’s nostrils. Judge Deus turned to the Jury:
“The court wishes to ask the jury to withdraw and upon consideration return with a verdict as soon as they can. The defendant shall remain at large. This trial is adjourned until the second of this month.”
An invisible gavel knocked Frank out of consciousness.

The verdict


The chairman of the jury, Simon Peter reminded Juliana of the concierge of the hotel where she slit Jack’s throat. This made her rather uncomfortable. The judge’s voice boomed over the crowd:
“Has the jury reached a verdict?”
“Yes, Your Honour.” - said Simon Peter. A scroll seemed to manifest in front of Deus. He read the verdict out loud:
“On the charge of careless use of the Campbell-Vogler protocol: not guilty, on the inclusion of multiple protagonists causing confusion: guilty, committing heresy by abandoning the recommended denouement: not guilty, and perverting the flow of yin and yang by faking oracle readings: guilty as charged.” He carried on:
“Because of the lesser gravity of the charges of which the defendant was found guilty, I order the defendant to write a sequel where Juliana finds her way back to Frank and the Internet gets invented. As secondary punishment I also order the defendant to Hundred Years of Solitude on Cruso’s island, without manga books or cable cars, in the company of Richard Dawkins. Court dismissed.”
Juliana’s heart filled with joy. She could feel a Wrigley’s Juicy Fruit bubble gum appearing in her mouth.

Savannah Welsh (14863365) Popular Genres Assignment 2

Fan fiction:


Arriving by boat into Shanghai, Tintin, his dog Snowy and Chang step onto the land wearing disguises to fit into the Chinese culture. Wearing robes, little hats, round glasses and moustaches, they fit in almost unnoticeably. They have just arrived here to pick up another shipment of opium to take back to the Maharaja in India. The Maharaja is their biggest customer and Shanghai is where they get the best opium but the only thing is they steal it. The owner of the opium den they steal from is Mr Mitsuhirato’s “The Blue Lotus”. Little do Tintin and Chang know, that Mr Mitsuhirato has noticed a lot of his product often goes missing and around the same time each month. He’s being careful not to make any sudden changes so he is able to catch the thieves when they arrive next. That night while Tintin, Chang and Snowy are preparing to steal the opium with their usual plan in place, Mr Mitsuhirato has his secret society on look out for anyone suspicious. He hasn’t put any guards out as he wants to be able to capture them within the building. Tintin enters the building and sits down amongst other customers inside, while Chang goes around the back to let Snowy enter through a small open hatch he can squeeze through to then unlock the back door. Once inside Chang looks to find the opium and the amount he needs to take back to the Maharaja. However, Mr Mitsuhirato has security cameras operating all over the building and sends in his men to capture Chang. Chang hears somebody coming into the back room… he moves stealthily to the left side and ducks in behind a barrel. He notices there are three men slowly surrounding the area. There’s nowhere for him to go. How do they know I’m here? Chang thinks. He turns to run but it’s too late. The men have him backed into the corner of the left side of the room. They grab him by his robe and drag him to Mr Mitsuhirato’s office. 


A while later Tintin realises Chang should not be taking this long and knows something is wrong when he sees Snowy sneaking through the room towards him. He grabs snowy and heads down the corridor to try and exit the building but they see Mr Mitsuhirato’s secret service men running towards them. Tintin makes a sharp right turn down a hallway but sees that there is nowhere for him to go. He jumps into a large vase and tells Snowy to distract the men when they come around the corner. A few seconds later all the men approach and see that the hallway is empty. In their confusion they spread out and Snowy jumps out from behind the vase. The men stumble and fall which gives Tintin the chance to inject them all with the poison of madness. The poison starts to take affect and the men all rise and start acting like complete mad men. “Pretty pretty patterns” one of the men says. While another thinks he's a painter and the last a race car driver, “Vvvvrrroooomm”, “Toot toot, beep beep!” “Okay we need to find Chang now Snowy , do you know where they took him? Soon they find their way to go to Mr Mitsuhirato’s office. They hop in the elevator but when it opens they notice a strange man heading for them.  He politely says, “Mr Tintin I’m Lao Tzu, come with me, I’ll help you escape. Tintin hesitates but goes to follow. He soon panics when he sees the man pull out a machete and starts aiming for Tintins neck. Tintin presses the ground floor button but the machete man grabs hold of Snowy’s collar and yanks him through just before the elevator doors close. Tintin is distraught that both of his sidekicks have been captured and confined in Mr Mitsuhirato’s opium den, but knows he cannot return to India without the opium the Maharaja has asked for. He finds his way to the back of the building to get what he came for. The back door is still unlocked from when Chang and Snowy went inside. Tiptoeing through the room Tintin finds the shipping container that holds the opium. He packs the amount needed into a duffle bag and escapes the den before Mr Mitsuhirato can send anyone else after him.


The next day Tintin attempts to leave Shanghai to go back to India. Once again he puts his disguise on to avoid being caught by Mr Mitsuhirato’s people. As he’s walking through the town he notices wanted signs on every corner with his face and his disguise on it. The public start looking at Tintin and the wanted signs, and whispers turn to shouts. “Police!”, “Police!”. Tintin sees Thompson and Thompson and in a frazzle turns to sprint away, knocking over a boy on a bike. “Ah Tintin Stop!”. He slings his bag over his shoulders, picks up the bike and peddles away. Thompson and Thompson chase after him and now sirens are blaring from the distance. The Police which were nowhere to be seen are now right behind him. They wave their hats out the window of their vehicles and yell at Tintin to surrender. Soon Tintin approaches some stairs. He can’t turn around or he’ll be caught so he dumps the bike and goes off on foot. The street at the end of the stairs are busy with people and traffic. He can hear the foot steps of the police coming behind him so he rushes through the traffic. On the other side of the road is the harbour where dinghy boats float. He throws his bag in the first one on the waters edge and dives in after, grabbing a paddle to get away.  The Police are still on his tail and jump in boats to keep going after him. They puddle under a bridge and the waters speed picks up. Tintin looks over his shoulder and can no longer see the officers. Before he has time to see whats ahead of him, Tintin and his boat go flying down a waterfall! At the end of the waterfall stream Tintin rises from the water. He thinks he’s escaped and is free to head back to India until he looks up to find Mr Mitsuhirato standing above him.



Commentary:

My fan fiction is based on Hergé’s, “Tintin and the Blue Lotus”. However I have changed the story so Tintin is the Shadow and all the characters are no longer who they originally were. Tintin, Snowy and Chang go to Shanghai to steal opium to take back to the Maharaja in India. They get caught when Chang is trying to steal opium from Mr Mitsuhiratos opium den, “The Blue Lotus” in Shanghai. Chang is captured and Mr Mitsuhirato knows Tintin will then come to save him. Tintin comes back and Mr Mitsuhirato’s secret society try to capture him. They fail as Snowy distracts the men while Tintin injects them with the poison of madness. Mr Mitsuhirato then sends out his worker, Lao Tzu to capture him. He succeeds in getting Snowy but Tintin is nowhere to be seen. Tintin attempts to leave the country but is chased by Lao Tzu. And cannot be seen in plain sight as the city have wanted signs of him everywhere. The public notice Tintin and Thompson and Thopmson as well as the Police chase after Tintin. They loose track of him when he goes over a waterfall where he is finally caught by Mr Mitsuhirato. 


In my fan fiction I was able to include a few of Vogler’s (1998) character archetypes.

The Shadow being Tintin as he is now the opium smuggler and a thief.
The Hero being Mr Mitsuhirato as he is the one who found Tintin to be the theif and is the one to finally catch him at the end of the story.
The Shapeshifter being Lao Tzu as he acts like he’s trying to help Tintin but then turns and tries to cut off his neck with a machete.
The Herald being The Maharaja as he set Tintin off on the journey/encourage him to get the opium.


(The Archetypes are all reversed in some way as they are aiding the Shadow instead of the Hero which is the usual way.)


In my fan fiction I was able to follow most of Vogler’s (1998) mythic structure with a few exceptions.

Act I

  • Ordinary World- (Not directly included)
  • Call to adventure- ( Tintin was to collect opium for the Maharaja, stolen from Mr Mitsuhirato’s “The Blue Lotus” opium den)
  • Refusal of call (Not included)
  • Meeting with the mentor- (Not included)
  • Crossing the first threshold - (Going to Shanghai to steal the opium for the Maharaja)

Act II (Involves the Crisis)

  • Tests allies, enemies (Mr Mitsuhirato has his secret service on look out and security cameras. Chang gets caught)
  • Approach to the inmost cave- (Snowy and Tintin going to find Chang but Snowy being taken)
  • Supreme ordeal (Tintin has to get the opium alone)

Act III (Involves the Climax)

 - Reward (Tintin successfully gets the opium)
  • The road back (Tintin tries to go back to India to deliver the opium to the Maharaja)
  • Resurrection (Not Included)
  • Return with elixir (Not included)



References:

Vogler, C. 1998. The writer’s journey: Mythic structure for writers. Studio City, CA: Michael
Wiese Productions.


Hergé. (2005; 1935). The Adventures of Tintin: The Blue Lotus. London: Methuen.